Aet Lindling

Ah, I love this. I wish I had read any of the cited works in full so I could review it.

This isn’t a comment on the poem, but personally I’d prefer to see a pencil sketch you made of your idea for the illustration, or a painting you found with ...

What does From Google mean?

Oh! And the song is %u201CYou got time and I got money%u201D by Smerz, who I plan to reach out to about permission (they are independent artists) if publishing for ...

Yes, the narrator is%u2026 kind of essential to the whole thing but a work in progress. They%u2019ve gotten plenty of criticism and I hope that is lessened once people see ...

Oh, also, with regards to the meaning of the dialogue Keira%u2019s dad is referencing abuse happening at the nursing center.

You could be right, I have a tendency to sometimes try and show too much and not tell enough with mass chunks of dialogue with no prose between the trains ...

Mind this was posted in 2014, and should be taken in that context. But also, we%u2019ve all but returned to those times in the US at least, so it reads ...

Well, I guess I should watch ND so I can read this.

Chapter five is up, and with it a brief mention of the instigator

I do wish the twist didn%u2019t require me to ignore most of this advice and allow you to reassess when I%u2019ve finished the novel. But it%u2019ll be fun to finally ...

I do wish the twist didn%u2019t require me to ignore most of this advice and allow you to reassess when I%u2019ve finished the novel. But it%u2019ll be fun to finally ...

This is extremely valuable advice! I was actually going to consult parents about these chapters and fix them up in that way, so thanks!

I suck at writing children I think. Im going to rework early Jess chapters, but mostly Im trying to cover her early backstory as quickly as possible so I can ...

Also, not to spoil too much especially when I haven%u2019t even started thinking much about book 2 and 3 besides the broad trilogy arc and another triple entendre for book ...